Saturday, 28 January 2023

Book review - Second Chance by Patricia Morton

 


Carole is a retired school teacher in her early sixties. She has shared her home with her friend Paula for over thirty years. Sadly Paula died, and Carole spent four weeks in a B&B as she could not face returning to an empty home. Carole tries to build a life without Paula. However, she is dismayed and surprised at the secrets Paula kept from her. A chance encounter with an old school friend Valerie leads her to join the University of the Third Age. Gradually Carole discovers that life still has lots to offer, rekindling old hobbies, learning new skills, a love affair and engaging new friends. Before Carole can adequately move on, she needs to find out the answers to some of Paula's secrets to get on with enjoying her new life. How does she help Valerie with her son Mark? How does Jenny brighten up Carole's Friday evenings? How does Carole help Charlotte have a happier life? Moreover, why has their joint bank account paid out three hundred pounds monthly to SAM73 for years? For the answers to these and other questions, read Second Chance by Patricia Morton. 

I loved how Carole's character changes as she becomes more confident with her new life. Changing the way she dresses and making new friends. Carole is like a pupa, gradually changing into a butterfly. I also enjoyed how Carole manages to change the lives, of all the new people she meets, for the better. It was a fascinating journey finding out about the bright, funny and fascinating Carole after being introduced to a dowdy retired teacher. 

I would have liked to learn more about Paula. Carole and Paula have lived together for most of their adult lives, but all we learn is that she was a retired teacher, too; she has set up a standing order to SAM73, and she controlled Carole to the point that they only ever did things together. Paula remained a ghost in the story, but that could be the author's plan.

Patricia Morton also has a terrible habit of putting 'had had' where just 'had' would do. There are a lot of grammar and spelling errors, and these mistakes spoil the flow of an otherwise excellent narrative. 

I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a good romance. In particular, older ladies would be able to appreciate Carole's dilema's and could learn a lot from the situations she finds herself in. Second Chance is a lovely story with many layers slowly removed to reveal the Carole she was always meant to be. There is no swearing, and sex is mentioned in the vaguest terms so we can delight in Carole's romance. 

Due to the lack of proofreading and editing, which spoilt the flow of this otherwise fabulous book, I would like to give Second Chance by Patricia Morton 4 out of 5 stars. 

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